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QUERY LETTER: THE INVERTER CYCLE

Kristopher Richards
[email protected]
[Phone Number]
[Address — optional, can use city only]

[Agent Name]
[Agency Name]
[Agency Address]

Dear [Agent Name],

THE INVERTER CYCLE is a science fiction trilogy exploring the physics of consciousness through the lens of economic inequality. Think ARRIVAL meets SORRY TO BOTHER YOU—hard science grounded in working-class authenticity.

When quantum biologist Helena Voss discovers that plants process information at the quantum level, she doesn’t just change science. She triggers a thirty-year race to control the “Inverter”—a biological switch that converts classical certainty into quantum possibility. The technology promises everything from unhackable communication to consciousness transfer. But it also threatens to concentrate power so completely that resistance becomes literally unthinkable.

The trilogy follows three women across three generations:

  • WILDFLOWER (1987-2027): Helena’s discovery at a Guildford university and the pattern of exploitation that follows her research
  • TALLY (2027): Economist Ana Rao, fighting to build an Underground economy on Chicago’s South Side while the Inverter enables total surveillance capitalism
  • COGITO (2028): Neuroscientist Maya Voss, Helena’s daughter, completing her mother’s work—and facing the choice to share power or consolidate it

What distinguishes this project is authenticity of place. These aren’t Hollywood versions of working-class life:

  • Guildford sequences filmed at The Row Barge pub (where my spouse’s cousin tends bar) and the actual University of Surrey quantum biology lab
  • Chicago’s South Side grounded in Lorenzo’s CafĂ© (my spouse’s uncle’s restaurant) and the #6 Jeffery Local bus my family rode for generations
  • Oxford’s May Morning tradition, BMW factory politics, and laboratory hierarchies researched firsthand
  • Broome, Australia’s Staircase to the Moon phenomenon and Yawuru cultural protocols developed with Indigenous consultation

The science is equally rigorous. The “Inverter” is based on actual quantum biology research—the Fleming Group at Berkeley’s work on cryptophyte algae, quantum coherence in photosynthesis, and the 77 Hz frequency that appears across biological systems. I’ve consulted the field’s leading researchers to ensure the speculative elements extend from established science rather than replacing it.

My background: [2-3 sentences about your relevant experience—scientific training, lived experience in these locations, previous writing credits if any. If no credits, focus on WHY you wrote this—personal connection to the themes.]

WILDFLOWER (110 pages) is complete and available for your review. TALLY (treatment complete) and COGITO (outlined) follow. All three can stand alone or work as a unified 5-hour epic—the structure accommodates either theatrical release or limited series adaptation.

The trilogy has been developed with production realities in mind: modest location counts, practical effects preferred over CGI, and a diverse cast that reflects the actual demographics of scientific and working-class communities.

I’d welcome the opportunity to send you the screenplay. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Kristopher Richards

QUERY LETTER — SHORT VERSION

(For email queries with 250-word limits)

Subject: Query — THE INVERTER CYCLE (Sci-Fi Trilogy)

Dear [Agent Name],

When quantum biologist Helena Voss discovers plants processing information at the quantum level, she triggers a thirty-year race to control the “Inverter”—a biological switch that could enable unhackable communication or total thought surveillance.

THE INVERTER CYCLE follows three women across three generations:

  • WILDFLOWER: Helena’s 1987 discovery and the exploitation that follows
  • TALLY: An economist building an Underground economy against surveillance capitalism
  • COGITO: Helena’s daughter completing her mother’s work—and choosing between sharing power or consolidating it

Think ARRIVAL meets SORRY TO BOTHER YOU: hard science grounded in authentic working-class experience. Locations researched firsthand—Guildford’s Row Barge pub, Chicago’s #6 bus route, Oxford’s May Morning tradition, Broome’s Staircase to the Moon. Science based on actual quantum biology research (Fleming Group, Berkeley).

WILDFLOWER (110 pp) is complete. TALLY and COGITO are outlined. The trilogy works as standalone films or a unified 5-hour epic.

May I send you the screenplay?

Best,
Kristopher Richards
[email protected]

LOGLINES FOR EACH FILM

WILDFLOWER

1987-2027 | Drama/Sci-Fi | 110 pages

A quantum biologist’s discovery that plants process information at the quantum level triggers a thirty-year race for control—forcing her to choose between scientific glory and protecting the pattern from those who would weaponize it.

TALLY

2027 | Thriller/Drama | 115 pages

An economist building an Underground economy on Chicago’s South Side must destroy her own creation when quantum surveillance technology threatens to make resistance literally unthinkable—unless she can teach a city to juggle.

COGITO

2028 | Sci-Fi/Epic | 120 pages

Thirty years after her mother’s disappearance, a neuroscientist completes the work that could transfer consciousness between bodies—then must decide whether to share the technology with humanity or consolidate power beyond challenge.

COMPARABLE TITLES (COMPS)

Primary Comps:

  • Arrival (2016) — Linguistic/physical science as narrative engine
  • Sorry to Bother You (2018) — Sci-fi grounded in authentic working-class experience
  • Ex Machina (2014) — Intimate exploration of consciousness and power

Secondary Comps:

  • Children of Men (2006) — Long takes, practical world-building, extended sequences
  • Moonlight (2016) — Three-act structure following one character across time
  • The Matrix (1999) — Reality-questioning with philosophical underpinning

Market Position: Adult science fiction with commercial thriller elements and awards potential. The trilogy structure offers both standalone viability and franchise expansion. The authentic working-class perspective differentiates from typical prestige sci-fi’s academic or corporate settings.

AGENT TARGET LIST

TIER 1: Major Agencies (Sci-Fi/Genre Specialists)

AgentAgencyNotesQuery Method
[Research specific agents]CAAMajor packaging powerReferral required
[Research specific agents]WMEStrong genre departmentQuery via website
[Research specific agents]UTAIndie and commercialQuery via website
[Research specific agents]ICM PartnersStrong lit departmentQuery via website

TIER 2: Boutique Agencies (Writer-Friendly)

AgencySpecialtyWhy TargetQuery Method
GrandviewDiverse voices, elevated genreRepresents Boots Riley (Sorry to Bother You)Query via website
Management 360Commercial genre, franchisesSci-fi specialistsQuery via website
VerveSpecs, emerging writersWriter advocacy focusQuery via website
Kaplan/PerroneFilm/TV crossoverSci-fi packagingQuery via website
3 ArtsComedy/drama crossoverCommercial with substanceQuery via website
UndergroundIndie credibilityArt-house + commercialQuery via website

TIER 3: Managers (Alternative Path)

Manager/CompanyFocusWhy Target
GrandviewManagers for writersSame company, manager division
Kaplan/StahlerEmerging genre writersSpec market specialists
Hero ArtistsDiverse voicesSocially conscious genre
Echo LakeManagement + productionCan package internally

QUERY STRATEGY

Phase 1: Soft Opening (Month 1)

Target 5-10 managers at Tier 2/3 companies

  • Managers are more accessible than agents
  • They develop material before agent submission
  • Success: 1-2 requests to read

Phase 2: Contests (Months 2-6)

Submit to major fellowships (see CALENDAR)

  • Nicholl/Sundance placement opens doors
  • Can mention in subsequent queries
  • Success: Quarterfinalist or above

Phase 3: Agent Wave (Months 6-12)

Target 20-30 agents at Tier 1/2

  • Reference contest results if available
  • Reference manager interest if secured
  • Query in batches of 5, wait 2 weeks, next batch

Phase 4: The Black List (Ongoing)

Host on Black List ($60/month)

  • Industry readers can find your work
  • 8+ scores generate agent interest automatically
  • Review feedback improves script

QUERY TRACKING SPREADSHEET

Create a spreadsheet with these columns:

Date SentAgent/ManagerAgencyMethodResponseNotes
[Date][Name][Agency]EmailPending[Any personal connection]

Follow-up protocol:

  • No response after 6 weeks = closed/no
  • Request for materials = send within 24 hours
  • Pass with notes = revise and re-query after 3 months
  • Pass with praise = ask to keep them informed of next project

WHEN YOU GET THE MEETING

The General Meeting (What They Want to Know)

1. “Tell me about yourself”

  • 2-minute version of your journey to this script
  • Why THESE locations, why THIS science
  • Personal connection to themes (class, consciousness, pattern)

2. “What else are you working on?”

  • TALLY and COGITO treatments (have them ready)
  • Any other scripts in development
  • What you want to write next

3. “Where do you see this going?”

  • Theatrical trilogy (ambitious)
  • Limited series (practical)
  • Either—depends on partner

4. “What directors do you see?”

  • Have 3 names ready (aspirational but realistic)
  • Explain WHY for each

5. “What’s your timeline?”

  • WILDFLOWER: Ready now
  • TALLY: 3 months to draft
  • COGITO: Outlined

Questions to Ask THEM:

  • “What’s your philosophy on developing new writers?”
  • “How do you see this project fitting the current market?”
  • “What would you want to see from me before taking this out?”

EMAIL TEMPLATES

Initial Query

Subject: Query — THE INVERTER CYCLE (Sci-Fi/Drama)

Dear [Agent Name],

[Insert SHORT VERSION query letter]

Best regards,
Kristopher Richards

Follow-Up (After 4 Weeks)

Subject: Following Up — THE INVERTER CYCLE Query

Dear [Agent Name],

I queried you on [date] regarding my science fiction trilogy THE INVERTER CYCLE. I wanted to follow up in case my email was overlooked.

To recap: WILDFLOWER (110 pages) follows a quantum biologist’s 1987 discovery that plants process information at the quantum level—and the thirty-year race to control this technology that follows.

I’d welcome the opportunity to send you the screenplay if it might be a fit.

Best,
Kristopher Richards
[email protected]

Response to Request

Subject: Re: Query — THE INVERTER CYCLE

Dear [Agent Name],

Thank you for your interest in THE INVERTER CYCLE. I’ve attached:

  • WILDFLOWER (PDF)
  • One-page synopsis of TALLY
  • One-page synopsis of COGITO

Please let me know if you need anything else. I look forward to your thoughts.

Best,
Kristopher Richards

FINAL NOTES

  1. Personalize every query. Reference a specific client of theirs, a recent deal, or why their roster suggests they’d respond to this material.

  2. Track everything. Rejection is data. Pattern of “not for me” = script needs work. Pattern of “loved writing, couldn’t connect” = targeting wrong reps.

  3. Don’t get discouraged by silence. Agents receive 100+ queries weekly. Persistence separates professionals from hobbyists.

  4. Remember: You only need ONE yes. The right agent is worth waiting for. The wrong agent is worse than no agent.

  5. Keep writing. While querying, work on TALLY. Having multiple samples demonstrates career potential, not just project potential.

“The inverter doesn’t convert. It invites.”

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